Friday, 15 March 2013

An Ordinary Afternoon

This Is my Ordinary Writing, I hoped you liked it.
I liked making it very much, and especially liked imagining it.


  1. Wow Teva, that is outstanding. I am so impressed by your book and your choice of presentation. I especially like when you wrote about your pencil carving the story.

  2. Your ordinary writing presentation is definitely extraordinary, Teva!

    Long live your imagination and the Digital City!

  3. Wow, Teva. This is an awesome story. The video we shot last year in your classroom will be online in a week or two. I will be linking this story to it. I have already shown it to bunch of colleagues and would like to share it with many teachers around the country. You sum up why technology can make such a difference. It gives us options. The way you say is going to turn a lot of teacher's heads. Big ups to Mr Moriarty for making a space to share stories with the rest of us.

  4. Thanks for sharing your not-so-ordinary writing with me. Your writing is very poetic and gives me an insight into your love for learning, especially writing and digital technology.

  5. Awesome Teva!
    That is very creative.
    I love all of it.
    Well done:-)

  6. Teva - loved the humour that was present in your illustrations and your writing, it made me smile. I think that the illustrations that you created worked really well with your writing. I will show this work to my class of students tomorrow in Hamilton I am sure that they (espically the Boys) will love it.
    Mr Webb and Room Five, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.

  7. Teva, Today when I showed you the photo of your great grandfather you said "I think he would have been a great story teller", and you were right. He was, but you are even better and he was the best I have known. I loved his stories as I love stories. Stories tell us about the world around us and our place in it, our maybe just the way we see it. It has been said that the pen is mightier than the sword.

    Teva I think you are amazing. I have sat at night many times making up bedtime stories. I think some of those stories have formed a garden and any time you want to write you can visit that garden and 'pluck the fruit'.

    1. Thanks, Dad.
      I Think you are good at stories, Too!
      I love you very, Very much, and I think your amazing too.

      Scinccerely, Teva Tait.

  8. Teva, that is wonderful writing and drawing too, I'm so proud of you!

  9. Grate work dude!
    I liked the way the story makes you realise how powerful books and the written word can be.
    Lance :-)

  10. Hello Teva I really liked your work. Very descriptive and I know your classmates would like it too.
    Your USA Penpal,

  11. Grate Teva well done that is a cool and awsome keep up the good work.



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